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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 5, 2010 12:20:44 GMT -5
Here i will type a story. Every week there will be a new chapter if not im probably grounded .
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 5, 2010 12:35:52 GMT -5
actually I changed my mind. I will write a chaper whenever i can. Chapter 1:The Orphanage It was a dark and stormy night.(THATS origional)I was about 2 months old. I was on the doorstep of the local orphanage and I was looking into the eyes of a lotus. She picked me up and noticed i was covered in rags to keep me warm. She looked up and around for my parents. Then she looked down again at me and said "your in the right place." Then i went to sleep as she carried me in. The next day i was spelling "car" with blocks. My name s Vroom Carson. As a tag on my blanket said. anyway, that day the lotus carried in a Xener about a month younger than me. And thats where our story begins.
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 5, 2010 12:41:14 GMT -5
u can post comments if u like.
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 5, 2010 13:05:04 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2:The Four For 5 years, me and Xener were best freinds. His last name is Spacer. On that 5th year...they came. A few days back a tornado rocked funkville, the town i lived in. apparantly the two that came both had their houses destroyed by that tornado and they had been traveling for days because both of their parents were killed by the tornado. Their names were Twinx Star and Sprout Daislin. When i first saw Twinx... magic happend. For the rest of our days at the orphanage we were the 4 bestest freinds ever.
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 5, 2010 16:31:20 GMT -5
Chapter 3:The Disaster "So Xener." i said. "What house did you get for us?" It was 7 years later. We had moved out of the orphanage and into funkeystown. We were able to pay for it because me and Xener sold tools and invetions while Twinx and Sprout sold flowers. At the moment the 4 of us were on the trolley. "Well i looked on my funkputer and got a great deal just for 100 coins. It has 4 bedrooms, a kitchen and a living room." He said. At that second we were at Grand funkey staition. We were greeted by Mayor Sayso and he gave us the grand tour. At the end he showed us the portals and said "these portals lead all over terrapinia and were invented by doctor tinker and the smartest of funkeys. Infact dr. tinker is working on the main potal staition right no..." Then suddenly the sky went dark and all the portals were shocked by lightning along with the main portal staition. "Oh no..." Mayor Sayso said "Dr. Tink..." I grabbed everyones arms and we all ran to town hall with Mayor Sayso in pure disbelief. Then the lights turned off and Twinx screamed and grabbed onto me in a hug. I was blushing alot more than usual when I was around her. (Good thing no one could see) Then outside the lightning stopped and Twinx let go then the lights were back on. We went outside and nothing was damaged but most of the portals.
Woah that... was long
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Post by whiteraj on Feb 5, 2010 22:38:03 GMT -5
Wow. Seems good. Can't wit till the next update.
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Post by funkeyz on Feb 5, 2010 23:11:55 GMT -5
Good so far C:
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 6, 2010 12:42:17 GMT -5
Chapter 4:The villan "Docter..." Mayor Sayso was in total awe after seeing Dr. Tinker wasnt by the main portal staition. Not even his body. A few days later we were all moved in. Then the sky turned dark again. "Not again!" Sprout said. but this time lightning didnt come, instead a giant cloud of darkness came out of the sky and formed into a giant black thing that had a big white mask. " I am Master Lox! Bow to me now or be destroyed!" Complete silence. Everyone in town was looking at him in awe. "Ah the heck with it. Henchmen! Rob these pitiful funkeys!" Then a bunch of machine looking guys with bucket heads went around shooting funkeys with coin stealing lasers. The 4 of us went into our crib and Xener turned on the total lockdown me and him installed earlier. Then we waited for it all to go away.
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Post by kirby9006 on Feb 15, 2010 15:42:56 GMT -5
Chapter 5:The Discovery When master lox went away (and left his henchmen there) the henchmen each stepped into one of the still working portals except the purple ones. " Great, first the portals go down now we'r all going to get robbed by a bunch of bucket heads? Great, just great." I said. "Dont worry Vroom" Xener said "We'll get through." The next day me and Xener were visiting Laputa staiton when Xeners energy tracker went crazy. It was pointing at Vroom de vroom and Xener landing.
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Post by funkatron6000 on Feb 26, 2010 23:53:30 GMT -5
I like it! looks like vroom+twinx=
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 13, 2010 17:06:16 GMT -5
Chapter 6:The Plan "So your theory is..." Twinx said. "That there is a powerful item in every game room?" We were near the laputa station portal "Yep thats pretty much somes it up." Xener said "Ive made some hologram projecters that we can strap on to make us look like certain funkeys. You see... I studied the portals and I found out that they scan funkeys. Same with the doors. So if we look like funkeys who go to certain areas it'll accept our access!" "What I dont understand is why noone thought of this before." I said. "its cause im totaly awsome!" Xener said
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 15, 2010 21:21:17 GMT -5
Chapter 7:The Search "I cant believe I have to go to that nuclear wasteland!" Twinx said. "Hey, it was tails so you go to the Fallout lab" Sprout said. We were just walking out of the laputa station portal. Sprout was going to the Boggle den and Twinx was going to Fallout lab "okay guys" Xener said "Go to the game rooms and find the item. Use those power trackers to help." We all ran to our places.
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 16, 2010 8:12:09 GMT -5
SNEAK PEEK! Twinx was still a little traumatic after her bro died. Shes lucky she even still has a family! I lost mine when I was only 2 months old! I was the only one who could calm her down. (with a bit of Lotises help.) Anyway Xener built a time machine and wants to test it out. It was a few days after Master Lox was deafeated. And our second adventure was about to start...
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 16, 2010 8:29:42 GMT -5
Chapter 8:The Challenge As i entered Vroom de Vroom, I looked around at guys going trough rings of fire and pairs of giant scissors. But what really caugt my eye was a green thingy that made my power tracker go crazy. It was on top of a trophy. When i started to reach for it, a Vroom said " well well well. Looks like the newbies taken an intrest in the thing I found in a dumpster. If you want that you gotta beat me in a race!" he said. "Names vrom by the way" he said. He was a very rare. I said "Your on!
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 18, 2010 15:09:58 GMT -5
chapter 9:The car Apparantly, word got out that I was going to race the best racer in the VRL(Vroom Racing League). They decided to have it at the FRL(Funkeys Racing League) track. Tickets started selling, and bets were flying everywhere! I was in the garage of our crib modifying my car: The Blue Star. I had made it during my spare time before master lox came. It includes saws that come out on each side along with extra-selfinstalling wheels and 48 1/2 cupholders.(Im kidding, theres only 2 )Theres also a passangers seat. When it was done, I was ready.
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 19, 2010 9:14:41 GMT -5
The funny parts will start pretty soon... Chapter 10: The The visit *Ding dong* I went to the door and answered it. It was Vrom. He wanted to come over and say good luck. "Good luck out there du..." He started to say when he looked over my shoulder. The other three were also at the door and Vrom was looking moony eyed at Twinx. She was kinda looking at him weirdly like he was crazy or somthing.(And I have to agree, she was right ) He noticed that and said to me "...de." And he left like that.
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 19, 2010 10:59:57 GMT -5
Heres all the characters so far: vroom: The hero, good mechanic and has a secret crush on Twinx Xener: Vrooms BFF, very smart, only one who knows Vrooms secret, but has a secret of his own Twinx:Can make stars come crashing down on enemys, has a secret Sprout:Great flower grower, has a pack of explosive seeds, also has a secret Mayor Sayso: Mayor of Funkeystown, has a secret Master Lox: Bad guy, has a secret Henchmen: Little bucket heads who steal coins Vrom:Best racer in VRL(Vroom racing league) Woh... Lots-o-secrets
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 19, 2010 17:51:18 GMT -5
Chapter 11:The race The track had three lanes on it. I was on the right, Vrom was in the middle. Fans from all over Terripinia were cheering. The race started. I was in front in a flash but Vrom tried to saw my backside of the car but I put a blade out and chopped his blade into pieces. Then he ended up right by me. We were almost to the finish line when he chopped off my left blade then started to move torwards my car with it. I had no choice but to have my car jump to the left lane. As he looked at me up above him in awe he was turning to fast and slammed rigt into the wall and his car exploded.I finished the race then went to his aid. One of his arms was half way cut of and the bones doctors came on the track and took him to the hospital. I stood by his wrecked car in awe and said "What have I done?"
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 19, 2010 18:31:38 GMT -5
Chapter 12: The gems I won the trophy but I felt bad for almost killing Vrom. When we got home I put the trophy in my trophy case and showed the others the green thing. They each had the same thing "These things contain alot of energy" Xener said. "Maybe we can recharge the portals with them!" "I say we ask mayor sayso about them." I said. Just then the green things flew out of our hands and clashed together. We all stared at it in awe until it floated down to the floor. I grabbed it and we ran out the door. "Its...its...one of the power gems!" Mayor Sayso said "this was one of the main sources of power to the portals!" " " we were all like. "I have a mission for you all" He said. "Collect more of these and maybe we can fix the portals!"
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Post by kirby9006 on Mar 21, 2010 10:44:20 GMT -5
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